Essay Writing – Introduction paragraph 10

Doctors should be responsible for educating their patients about how to improve their health. 

Do you agree with this?

keywords : doctors, patient education, health

Physicians have been a trusted source of information for patients. Although there is a plethora of medical information easily available online, most of them are neither credible nor reliable. I completely agree that a doctor plays a vital role in educating patients about their health. This essay will show how increased emphasis on patient self management and self care makes a doctor’s role quite important.

 https://www.ncbi.nlm.nih.gov/pmc/articles/PMC2922822/

In the past, older generation were a source of knowledge and experience. Nowadays, the older generation have little understanding or experience of the modern world. 

Has this had any negative impact on the way elderly are treated by society and family?

What could be done to solve this situation?

keywords : older generation, a source of knowledge and experience, little understanding , modern world , negative impact 

Elderly people, who were once the wise counsellors for the young, are now facing  a grim situation of being unable to come to grips with modern technology. Nowadays the mobile screens give the instant answers that back in the day old people would have given as wise elders. In that context, as a source of wisdom and advice, they are becoming less relevant in recent times. This has given rise to many psychological as well as social problems for old people which will be discussed in this essay. 

https://exploringyourmind.com/older-people-lost-in-modern-times/

As a result of growth in some urban centers, the environment in those cities is deteriorating.

How could this issue be tackled by both the government and individuals?

 keywords : growth, urban centers, environment, deteriorate, government, individuals.

Many major cities are enjoying the fruits of economic growth, but this growth has exerted a damaging effect on local environment. This is a worrisome issue which demands urgent attention. This essay will show how public participation in environmental decision making and implementation of legislation by the government can effectively deal with this issue. 

https://www.sciencedirect.com/book/9780444627339/environment-and-development#:~:text=Description-,Environment%20and%20Development%3A%20Basic%20Principles%2C%20Human%20Activities%2C%20and%20Environmental,both%20natural%20and%20inhabited%20environments

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Many people buy products that they do not really need and replace old products with new ones unnecessarily. 

Why do people buy things they do not really need?

Do you think this is a good thing?

keywords : buy, products, do not need, replace, old and new ones

People, driven by greed, keep hoarding unnecessary things. They easily lose interest in things they have and crave for newer things. Research shows that this phenomenon is attributable to some psychological reasons. In my opinion, to desire for more is the cause of unhappiness, one should be satisfied and thankful for what one possesses rather than constantly buying unnecessary stuff. 

While it is sometimes thought that prison is the best place for criminals,

others believe that there are better ways to deal with them.

What is your opinion?

keywords : prison, best place, criminals

Lawbreakers and convicts are better confined between the walls of a prison cell rather than roaming freely in the society. Yet some people argue that there should be a prison system away from retribution and focusing on rehabilitation. In my opinion, inmates should have a chance to reconstruct their lives so that they can be reintegrated in societies as functioning members upon release. 

https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Rehabilitation_(penology)