Assignment Day 29

IELTS Speaking Task 2

Describe an occasion when someone gave you positive advice or suggestions about your work/study

You should say:

  • Who the person is
  • What he/she said
  • How the advice/suggestion affected you
  • And explain how you felt about the advice/suggestion

There are two types of people: those who offer some constructive advice and those who offer wrong advice with some malicious motive behind that. 

It is very difficult to identify which category the advice giver belongs to. 

But, I have always observed that our teachers and some elderly persons are always our well-wishers. We can always depend upon their wise counsel. 

I have been fortunate as I had many inspiring school-teachers who illuminated my path and never let me waver from my goals. 

But, there came a time when I was about to lose my focus from my studies.

It was the time when I was in Class X (10). My father had given me a pocket radio at that time. 

I am a connoisseur of Indian movie songs. And all day I listened to movie songs on my radio. 

Before I got the radio, my study schedule included all the subjects such as Math, Science, History, English , and so on.

But, after I got the radio, I started neglecting my studies. 

I would often skip my classes at school and go to the school canteen to enjoy music  with tea and light snacks.

My English teacher Mr. Johnson was a very strict about students attending their class. And he would not tolerate if he caught someone misbehaving in his class or loitering in the school campus during the school time. 

As usual, I was in the canteen and forgot to attend Mr. Johnson’s class. Someone from my class reported me to Mr. Johnson. This made him furious.

He called my parents and informed them about this. 

The next day, I was there in his staff room with my parents. I was shaking with fear

But, something unexpected happened. He smilingly told me to focus on my studies and limit the music listening time to evening hours , not during the school time. 

He reprimanded me (/rebuked me) for neglecting my studies. But it was in a very gentle manner. 

He pointed out my past achievements. He encouraged me to study hard and prepare for the Board exams. 

I felt so ashamed that tears started running down my cheeks. I promised him that I would work  hard and make him proud when the results came. 

On that day, when I came home, I gave that radio back to my father. I told him that I would not use it until I get an A in all my subjects. 

And then I studied for 6 hours a day for the next 5 months. And when the results came, I could not hold back my tears when I saw that I had fulfilled my promise. And in the English subject I had got an A+.

I felt very grateful to my teacher Mr. Johnson. If he had not offered a sound piece of advice, I would not have achieved this excellent result. 

Even today, when I think about that episode, my eyes get moist at that thought of that great teacher. 

Part 3

When should parents encourage their children?

Parents should applaud the virtuous behavior of their kids. They should also inspire their kids when they are taking part in sports or nurturing dreams to achieve academic excellence.

Should parents always encourage their children?

No, they must stop them if they are heading towards a wrong path. 

For instance, when a child is using foul language, he/she should be censured at once by parents. 

Encouragement is only permissible when children are doing something that is not inappropriate. 

Do you think negative feedback is more important than positive feedback? Why?

I can say that negative feedback is more important than the positive one. 

For instance, if we are preparing for the IELTS test and our tutor never points out our mistakes, then we will end up repeating the same mistakes in our actual IELTS test. 

Of course, it is disheartening to see our flaws. But, a flaw turns into a strong point when we identify it. 

Why is negative feedback as important as positive feedback at work or in study?

Positive feedback gives us encouragement. We can never deny its importance.

But, negative feedback sobers us and stops us from become narcissists who are obsessed with our perfections while ignoring our flaws. 

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